as for the fic itself, it started out pretty boring and agonizingly slow paced, but it gained momentum somewhere around chapter 10. it suffers somewhat from overused cliches like 'his eyes flashed dangerously' and repeating the word 'demon' for like five times in a single sentence when bill's around, but mabel calls dipper 'broski' sometimes, and that's adorable!
found myself reading a second billdip fanfic in a row. i don't really where does such a pairing even come from, i mean, a boy and a malign dorito triangle-shaped demon? how is that supposed to work? but, well, after rewatching the show for the third time (at least i think it was the third time), i just didn't feel like letting go of the characters and the story just yet. so there's that.
as for the fic itself, it started out pretty boring and agonizingly slow paced, but it gained momentum somewhere around chapter 10. it suffers somewhat from overused cliches like 'his eyes flashed dangerously' and repeating the word 'demon' for like five times in a single sentence when bill's around, but mabel calls dipper 'broski' sometimes, and that's adorable!
as for the fic itself, it started out pretty boring and agonizingly slow paced, but it gained momentum somewhere around chapter 10. it suffers somewhat from overused cliches like 'his eyes flashed dangerously' and repeating the word 'demon' for like five times in a single sentence when bill's around, but mabel calls dipper 'broski' sometimes, and that's adorable!